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Which software did you two use BTW?
Im not feeling the sky, try filling that up a bit more, dramatize it, you call thi spiece organica but it seems so dead, its not alabout the renders mak eth eimage look interesting as a whole, more stars, weird constellations, milkyways whatever....
I like the render in the middle of the image, i can recognize a body in it, the rest is just to bulky, too big.
this is a collaboration put more work in it, there is 2 of you, this result can be achieved by 1 person easily
into the details => check some of the edges of the renders, clean them up, they are a bit jaggy here and there.
Too many black areas in the picture. loose the grainy look of the mountains, in fact loose the mountains, give it a more spooky mountain range, weird shapes with holes and such, fantasy ppl.
Overall=> BAM!! it up a bit, there is 2 of you, maybe you can use weird fractals as a out of this world aura around the models, just a suggestion or two.
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